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高中英语概要写作要点之删除事例与数据 一：删除事例与数据 案例1 ①Aprovecho has now partnered with a stove manufacturer in China.②The company is making Aprovecho’s first mass-produced stoves.③They are said to use 40%-50% less wood than an open fire,and produce 50%-70% less smoke.④A company called StoveTec is selling them through its website for less than ten dollars.⑤Dean Still says that more than one hundred thousand have been sold so far. 详细解析:段落中第一句话表示Aprovecho现在与中国的一家炉具制造商合作。第二句话表示该公司正在制造Aprovecho首批量产的炉具。第三句话表示它们比明火少用40%-50%的木材,少产生50%-70%的烟雾。第四句话表示一家名为StoveTec的公司在其网站上以不到10美元的价格出售这些产品。第五句话表示到目前为止其销量已经超过10万。后面几句是具体的数字与例子的描写,因此,主题句在段首。 自我概括:? 参考表达:Now Aprovecho has achieved the goal and the new stoves made by its Chinese partner are said to be selling pretty well. 简要解析:用“has achieved the goal”高度概括“Aprovecho has now partnered with a stove manufacturer in China.The company is making Aprovecho’s first mass-produced stoves.”;用“selling pretty well”高度概括数量表达“more than one hundred thousand have been sold so far”,删除具体数字“They are said to use 40%-50% less wood than an open fire,and produce 50%-70% less smoke.”;删除具体例子“A company called StoveTec is selling them through its website for less than ten dollars.”,把握主旨大意。 案例2 ①The most important aspect of speaking is having good self-esteem.②Self-esteem is how you feel about yourself.③When most Chinese people are asked how their English is,or they are told their English is very good,they immediately respond by saying,“Oh,my English is very poor.” ④If you say this to yourself often enough,you will believe it.⑤When someone compliments (称赞) you,just say “thank you”. 详细解析:段落第一句表示演讲最重要的一点是要有良好的自尊心。第二句表示自尊是你对自己的感觉。第三句表示当大多数中国人被问及他们的英语如何,或者被告知他们的英语很好时,他们立即回答说,“哦,我的英语很差。”第四句表示如果你经常这样对自己说,你就会相信它。第五句表示当有人赞美你时,你只要说“谢谢”就可以。主题句是第一句,后面几句话是对前面观点的具体阐述。 自我概括:? 参考表达:Having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English. 简要解析:删除第二句话对self-esteem具体的描述,删除第三、四、五句讲述的具体事例,然后对第一句话进行概括,变important为importance,进行词性替换,修饰词也相应的变换,运用了高档句型sth be of vital importance进行同义转述。 案例3 When cold