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小学+初中+高中 学案(三) 求助信 [题型技法] (学一学) 写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难，需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应 用一般现在时表达文意，当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。 [经典考题] (悟一悟) [典例] (2016·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书 和个人简历 (resume)。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式 (format)。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [满分范文] Dear Ms Jenkins， ①I’m Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. ②I have already filled in the applicationform and had my resume ready for it. ③ However, I’m not sure about the words and format. ④Therefore, I’m writing t ask for your help and professional advice. ⑤Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? ⑥Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words andformat? ⑦Besides, I’d like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. ⑧I’d be most grateful if you could do me a favor. ⑨I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua [阅卷评点] ③表示转折关系的过渡词，把前两句看似平淡的叙述提到了一定的高度，很好地为下句 做了铺垫。 ④therefore 关系明确，因果适当，不但使上下文融会贯通，而且突出了写信目的。 ⑤Would you please do ...？是请求别人帮助的句型，用得恰到好处，符合说话者的 身份；过去分词 attached 作定语，使句子更加简练地道，增加了文章的可读性。 ⑥Would you mind doing ...？不同的句式表达了相同的意思，避免了表达形式的单一 化，语气委婉。 小学+初中+高中 小学+初中+高中 ⑧这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful 道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情， 也显示了作者较高的语言运用能力。 [增分佳句] (背一背) 1．开头部分常用语： (1)My name is ...I’m writing to you for some help. 我叫……，写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。 (2)I’m writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor. 我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。 2．寻求帮助常用语： (1)Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help. 面对这么多的困难，我不得不向你求助。 (2)In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ... so that ... Also, I would l