高中英语续写素材-环境描写08 Bird-读后续写素材之环境描写.docxVIP

专题 08 The Description of Bird ——本章节聚焦于各种与鸟类有关的景象，包括鸟飞、鸟叫等场景的描写 8-1 The forest is the orchestra consisted of the birds, playing one enchanting symphony after another. 译文：森林是一支由鸟儿们组成的管弦乐队，演奏着一首又一首迷人的交响乐 亮点词汇 亮点词汇 orchestra n.管弦乐队 enchanting adj.迷人的; 令人陶醉的; 使人喜悦的; v.使着迷; 使陶醉; 使中魔法; 对…用魔法(或念咒语); symphony n.交响乐 one after another 一个接着一个 技法讲解：连锁比喻 技法讲解：连锁比喻 8-1 中用了连锁比喻来表现鸟的叫声，先将森林中的鸟儿比作一支铜管乐队（orchestra），紧接着，在这个比喻设定的基础上，自然而然地将鸟儿的叫声比喻成迷人的交响乐（enchanting symphony），十分生动有趣。连锁比喻相较于一般的比喻而言，更注重挖掘前后两个比喻之间的关联性，使得比喻用得更加贴切、 传神。 8-2 Blackbird with jet-black plumage and beak of polished amber, hopping through longer shaggy grass of spring, tugging at worms. 译文：黑鸟有着乌黑的羽毛，一种擦亮了的琥珀色的鼻子，在春天长而蓬松的草丛中跳跃着，拽着虫子。 亮点词汇 亮点词汇 jet-black 乌黑色的plumage 全身羽毛 polished 抛光的; 磨光的; 擦亮的; 优雅的; 娴熟的; 擦光; 磨光; 修改; 润饰; 润色; polish 的过去分词和过去式 hopping 很活跃的; 忙忙碌碌的; 单脚跳行; 齐足跳行; 突然快速去某处; hop 的现在分词shaggy 长而乱的; 乱蓬蓬的; 头发蓬乱的 tugging 拉，拖，拽; 拉; tug 的现在分词 生词难词 生词难词 beak 鸟喙; 鹰钩鼻; 尖鼻; 鼻子; 掌权者; 法官 amber 琥珀; 琥珀色; 黄褐色; 琥珀色的; 琥珀制的 worms 蠕虫; 寄生虫; 肠虫; 幼虫; 蠕动， 8-3 The birds were silhouettes against the orange-kissed heavens. Only an hour ago they would have been pale against a blue sky, but the twilight was advancing and soon they would be lost in blackness, roosting with head tucked under wing until dawn. 译文：鸟儿的轮廓衬托着橙色的天空。就在一个小时前，它们在蓝天的映衬下还显得苍白，但暮色正在降 临，很快它们就会迷失在黑暗中，栖息着，头埋在翅膀下，直到黎明。 亮点词汇 亮点词汇 silhouette n.(浅色背景衬托出的)暗色轮廓;(人的)体形;(事物的)形状;剪影;(尤指人脸的)侧影 v.使呈现暗色轮廓 twilight n.黄昏，暮色 be lost in blackness 陷入黑暗roosting 栖息; roost 的现在分词 tucked 塞进，折叠，卷起; 把…塞进狭窄，tuck 的现在分词形式 8-4 Short stubby beak, bright eyes like black onyx beads, alert, dainty head tilting this way and that, milk chocolate plumage, plump chest, shiny black wrinkled feet, a saggy fold of skin at the ankle, three thin toes forward and one back clasp the branch with sharp black talons, hopping, flitting from tree to tree. 译文：短而粗的喙，明亮的眼睛像黑玛瑙珠，机警、精致的头向左右倾斜，乳巧克力色的羽毛，丰满的胸 亮点词汇部，闪亮的黑皱的脚，下垂的脚踝皮肤，三个细脚趾向前和一个后用锋利的黑爪扣住树枝，跳跃，在树间 飞来飞去。 亮点词汇 stubby 短而粗的; 矮壮的; dainty 娇小的; 娇美的; 精致的; 小巧的; 文雅的; 优雅的; 高雅的til