2024届广东省深圳高三下学期二模英语应用文解析讲义.docx

24深圳二模应用文解析

第四部分写作(共两节，满分40分)

第一节(满分15分)

假定你是李华，你班在校英语戏剧节中获得一等奖，外教James打算为此庆祝，并委托你调查同学们喜欢的方式。请你根据调查结果，给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：

1.表达感谢;

2.提出个人建议；

3.说明理由。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearJames,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

审题

1.单向的表达感谢及理由；（段一）

2.扼要的图表调查结果描述；（段二）

3.个人抽取其中一项或多项推荐给外教James;（段二）

4.并对推荐项目辅以理由；（段二）

5.礼貌性收尾和回扣首段。（段三）

句型积累

一、表示感谢

1.Iamwritingtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudeforyourintentiontocelebrateourclass’sfirstprizewin(n.胜利)attheschool’sEnglishDramaFestival.Itisamomentofprideforallofus,andyoursupportmeansalot.

2.Thankyoufortrustingmewiththetaskofsurveyingourclassmates’preferredactivitiestocelebrateoursuccessattheEnglishDramaFestival.Herearethesurveyfindingsalongwithmypersonalopinion.

3.It’smyhonortoextendourheartfeltthanksforyourgenerousoffertocelebrateoursuccess.Yoursupportandenthusiasmaretrulyinspiring.

二、描述图表

1.BasedonthesurveyIconducted,88%ofusareenthusiasticaboutaweekendouting,while59%favouranEnglishmovienight,followedby32%whopreferafoodparty.

2.The‘outingatweekends’wasthetopchoiceforcelebration,favoredbyasignificantmajoritywith88%ofthevotes.Sharingfoodanddrinkscameinsecond,preferredby32%,whilewatchingEnglishmoviesattractedtheleastinterestat59%.

3.Thesurveyrevealsthat88%ofstudentsarekeenoncelebratingwithaweekendouting.Sharingfoodanddrinksalsofoundfavor,accountingfor59%.Ontheotherhand,watchingEnglishmoviesfellbehind,withonly32%ofthevotes.

4.Fromthesurvey,outingsonweekendsandEnglishmovienightsarefavoredby88%and59%ofusrespectively（分别）,with32%keenonsharingfoodanddrinks.

三、建议+理由

1.Mysuggestionisinlinewith（与……一致)thedesireofmanytoengageinamoreactiveandoutdooractivity,whichwouldserveasarefreshingbreakfromouracademicroutine.Moreover,anoutingallowsustorelaxandcelebrateoursuccessinawaythati