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①OneSundaylastyear,eightofushikedforacoupleofhoursthroughthedesertnearSanDiegotoreachThunderCanyonCave.Wehadtoabseil(沿绳滑下)throughanicywaterfalltogetinside,soweputonourwetsuitsandloweredourselves30feetdown.By11:00a.m.wewereinside.Afterweclimbedfurther,wereachedanine-inchcrack.Havingmovedforfourhours,Iwastiredandwet.

②Thegroupleader,Luca,wasguidingthreecavers.Oneofthem,Stevegotstuckinthecrack.Therewas10minutesofpullingandpushinguntilStevewasfree.Hewastiredandneededtoleave.Luca,assumingI’dbeenthroughthecrackbefore,guidedStevethroughthecaveforanother15minutestoanexit.Iwassecondfromlasttogothrough.Ididn’trealizethatLucawasn’tthere—ifI’dknown,Iwouldn’thaveattemptedthecrack,asIneededanexperiencedguide.

③Thechallengeistoputyourfeetfirstdownthelengthofthecrack,andthenmoveyourbodysidewaystoswingalong,beforedroppingfivefeettothefloorofthenextspace.Onmyfirstattempt,IknewIwouldn’tmakeitthrough,butthegroupencouragedmetotryagain.Ididn’twanttoinconvenienceanyonebyhavingtomakethelongtripbackthroughthecave,soIbackedoutandtookoffmywetsuit.InjustmyT-shirt,Itriedtoslidethroughagainbutmyhips(屁股)weretrapped.Myfeetwerehangingontheothersideandmyleftarmsupportedmybody.Myhandrestedonawoodenboardthathadbeenleftcoveringboulders(大圆石)toprotectcaversfromslipping.LucareturnedandtheteamtriedeverythingtoshiftmeasImentallyfocusedonescape.

④Aftertwohoursmyarmweakened,soIslidfurtherintothecrack,wherethegapwasonly8.5incheswide.Mybodyweightwasonmylefthand,mybackandchesttouchingthecoldstonewalls.Theguybehindme,Jim,triedunsuccessfullytopullmeback.Ofcourse,Iwasblockinghisescape,too.

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