高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练03（解析版）.docxVIP

高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练03

一、无灵主语句（情绪具象化）

?Awave/surgeof+情绪名词+动作动词（swept/flooded/rushed）+oversb.

?情绪名词+动作动词（filled/clung/lingered）+范围/感官部位,makingsb.+状态

1.原句：_______________________________________whensheheardhergrandmawassafe.

翻译：听到奶奶平安的消息时，一股如释重负的感觉涌上她的心头。

2.原句：_____________________________,makingithardforhimtolookhisfriendintheeye.

翻译：愧疚像湿布一样缠着他，让他难以直视朋友的眼睛。

答案：

Asurgeofrelieffloodedoverher

Guiltclungtohimlikewetcloth

段落一（Awave/surgeof...句式+情绪名词+动作动词句式）

Lilapacedbackandforthinthehospitalwaitingroom,herhandstwistedtightlytogether.Theclockonthewalltickedloudly,eachsoundstretchinghernervesthinner.Justasshewasabouttoburstintotears,thedoctorwalkedoutandnoddedather.(1)_______________________

_________________,(一股如释重负的感觉涌上心头)makingherlegsgoweakforamoment—she’dbeenterrifiedsomethingbadhadhappenedtoherdad.Sherushedtothedoctor,andwhenhesaid“yourfatherisoutofdanger,”(2)__________________________________(喜悦充满了她的胸膛),makinghervoiceshakeasshethankedhimrepeatedly.Eventhecold,sterileairofthehospitalfeltwarmernow,wrappedinthecomfortofthegoodnews.

答案：

Asurgeofrelieffloodedoverher

joyfilledherchest

段落二（情绪名词+动作动词句式+Awave/surgeof...句式）

Jakestaredatthebrokenmodelplaneonthetable—he’dpromisedtofixitforhislittlebrother,buthe’dforgottenandplayedvideogamesinstead.(1)__________________

________________,(愧疚像湿布一样缠着他)makingithardforhimtolookhisbrotherintheeyewhentheboywalkedin.Hisbrother’slipstrembledashepickedupthepieces,and(2)__________________________________(一股悔恨涌上杰克的心头).Hekneltdownbesidehisbrother,takingthemodelfromhishands.“Let’sfixittogether—betterthanbefore,”hesaid,rummagingthroughhisdrawerforglue.Astheyworkedsidebyside,(3)__________

________________________,(愧疚感慢慢消退)replacedbyaquietwarmththatmadeJakevownevertobreakapromiseagai