【写作160篇】考研英语写作——2011年考研英语写作练习修改与点评-论个性.doc

各位研友： 大家好！ 附件中是部分考研1号读者朋友们根据考研1号系列图书相关话题所作的写作练习。里面附有考研1号编辑所作的具体点评与修改意见，希望大家在日常写作练习中能积极的学习吸收这些读者作文中的优点以及不足，对比自己写作中存在的一些细节问题，从而在以后自己写作练习中积极改进类似的错误，学习其中好的写作思路与写作句式。 考研1号编辑们提醒大家，在进行写作练习的时候，切莫单纯的追求写作数量，以期达到写作能力的提高，量的积累是必须的，但是我们更要注重每一篇写作需要在前一篇写作的基础上去练习，而不是所有的写作都基于同样的水平，犯同样的错误，这样的话，大家会感觉自己练习了很多篇写作，但是水平依然没有提高的困惑。鉴于此，考研1号编辑们提醒大家，可以就一个话题，进行写作，反复修改，逐步提高，循序渐进的写作思路才是正确的，可取的，经过自己一遍又一遍的思考，你会发现自己每一次修改都会提升，就像考研1号一位读者发送邮件告诉编辑们，自己认真总结了前面的作文点评与修改意见之后，认真的去写作，发现自己把作文输入电脑的过程也是学习提升的过程，邮件中说道“我想说一下，在我在电脑上打字，并给您发作文的感受，这篇文章在纸上写的时候，并不如现在这样完整，后来在打字的过程中，又是对自己写的作文的整理以及优化的过程，本来之前不会写的地方或者是没有思路的地方，不知怎的，有了灵感，我非常享受这个过程，而且感觉也挺有帮助的。” 考研1号编辑们衷心希望大家能从写作练习中有所收获，享受写作的过程，也是我们写作能力提升的积极心理因素。祝愿大家能以一个积极乐观的心态复习备考。 【写作原文】考研英语话题图画作文《写作160篇》之“”话题读者写作练习 ???The picture above,is intends to convey us something about individuality.No matter who we are ,we are different.Everyone owns its characteristics and we shouldn't be afraid of being different.In other words,just to be yourselves,no matter how the others say about.To?remember that there is no two same leaves in the world,it's your individuality that lead to your success. ???????Bill Gates,known for its microsoft company,also is a person who is special.He abandoned to study in Havard without hesitation, which is a college that every young people dreams of.His uncommon behaviours confused others,but he didn't pay more attention to those disagree voice.After that,he get through many difficults and runned a company involving in?IT,which is his favor in the college.As we all witnessed that,he made?it.He become one of the world richest person.All his stories are viewed as a legend that set an example to many people.espically the young generation,who are confused whether to be a real ,and?do the things they like. There is non reason for me to refuse such a point of view.It is for your individuality that you are yourselves.Without the individuality,we are all the same,how we could be out-standing and be honored by the public.We also must,however,be realistic.A dream witho