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Personal Statement Proposed Programme: LLM at **** University Applicant: ZHOU Xia My desire to study Law stems from a growing fascination with World events, as well as with the minutiae of our day-to-day existence. The event of Sino-American special protectionist tariffs once again unveils the crucial and indispensable status of law in the global context. A complete set of regulation should be needed to standardize every country’s behavior and to coordinate the contradictions among different nations. Stimulated by the prominent controversies in the world, I am firm with my choice to pursue jurisprudence in this realm. As Helena Kennedy QC states The Law is the bedrock of a nation; it tells us who we are, what we value, who has power, and who hasnt. Almost nothing has more impact on our lives. (Just Law, 2004) That’s, law is not only the weapon of counterattacking criminals but also the disseminator of human nature, and lawyers can be an important source of protein. I am convinced that studying in a brand-new condition with strong and mature atmosphere of law learning will pave my way to my dream soon. I promise that I will make greater accomplishment if offered the valuable opportunity to study at your university. 1）其实写ps不同创作文章，不需要刻意去强调新意，而是要注重把学生的专业素养体现出来。其实你朋友提的意见也是有道理的，可以把你的工作经验提前，之前我帮学生也有这样写的。但是要注意到文章结构这个问题，因为你的法律工作经验很丰富，我在ps里引用了三个比较突出和有代表性的，如果以事例开头，就要先把事例都写完，然后再接你的学习动机等，这样的结构我也有考虑过的，但是就会显得头重脚轻了，所以我放弃了这种结构。还是决定先以你的学习目的作为开头。2）关于你朋友提到的多写你观察到什么现象，其实我写这个中美关税问题就是为了表现你理论联系实际，在最新的国际时事里发现法律的重要性和社会地位。然后引用的名言是进一步支撑你对法律的认识。3）所以，第一段其实就是整个你学习目的表现，如果单纯空白写，可能就会空洞点，考虑到这点，我当初写的时候就想起引用事例，这样一会吸引目光，二可以体现你是个关心国家时事，注重理论联系实际的学生，外国学校比较喜欢这样的学生哦。 As regards my academic studies, I have established solid groundwork in law. Owning to my excellent abilities of analysis and apprehension, I performed well in my speciality receiving three successive scholarships. What’s more, I am fond of thinking independently and critically. Never am I confined to the original thoughts or the written