2013年江苏高考英语抢分训练44.docVIP

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正： 　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 　　A warm - heart nurse on her first day’s work came to 76．__________________ a patient. She asked him she could do anything for 77．__________________ him, and he only waved his hands and said something 78．__________________ she could hardly understand. She asked him again 79．__________________ and he just kept saying the different words, but 80．__________________ in a more lower voice, before closing his eyes. She 81．__________________ felt his pulse and found him death. She rushed to 82．__________________ repeat to the doctor sounds she had heard. “My 83．__________________ dear girl,” said the doctor after listen carfully to 84．__________________ what she repeats,“he was saying you’re standing on my oxygen pipe.” 85．__________________ 　　 书面表达　　请根据下列提示的要点，以What will life be like without animals为题，介绍保护珍稀（rare）动物的意义及必要性。 　　1．动物是人类亲密的朋友，尤其是珍稀动物的存在使整个世界变得丰富多彩； 　　2．最近听到甚至动物园里的珍稀动物都遭到人为伤害，深表震惊。事件的发生源于有些人对保护动物认识不够及对动物漠不关心； 　　3．牢记保护珍稀动物是我们每个人的职责，我们应学习宣传（publicize）其意义，并采取积极有效措施。 　　要求：1．内容必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥； 　　　　　2．词数100左右。 　76．warm-heart→warm-hearted. 　提示：“形容词＋名词＋ed”构成复合形容词。 　　77．him∧→if／whether．　提示：if／whether意为“是否”，在此引导宾语从句。 　　78．and→but.　提示：表转折应使用but. 　　79．√ 　　80．different→same.　提示：由keep saying可推知。 　　81．more→much或去掉more.　提示：lower是low的比较级，所以不可再用more.“much＋比较级”意为“…的多”。 　　82．death→dead.　提示：find him dead意为“发现他死了”。 　　83．∧sounds→the.　提示：sounds后接定语从句，表特指应带定冠词the. 　　84．1isten→1istening.　提示：介词after后接动词-ing形式作宾语。时。 　　85．repeats→repeated.　提示：讲述过去的情况应使用过去 　　书面表达 　　A possible version: What will life be like without animals 　　Animals are close friends of human beings. Their existence, especially the existence of rare animals makes the whole world lively and colorful. Unfortunately, we heard such news recently that rare animals, even kept in the zoo, couldnt escape being hurt and