2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题03 辩论对比话题指导.docVIP

2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题03 辩论对比话题指导 实例指导1—如何写好辩论式书面表达 More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it … 【写作思路】 本文为辩论式议论文。其格式和结构为：第一段，综述辩论的内容(本文已经给出)；第二段，表述正方观点及理由；第三段，表述反方观点及理由；第四段，陈述自己的观点。 【写作指导】 Is Training Class Or Family Teacher Necessary? More and more；middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends . There are two different viewpoints about it. Some think it necessary．It’s effect view to study with a teacher than by themselves．It can strengthen what is learnt in the class．They can learn a lot more. Some think it unnecessary．Students can easily become dependent．Students need time to relax from time to time．The purpose of many training classes and teachers is making money. h my opinion，if a training class or family teacher is needed depends . If you are really very weak or interested in a certain subject，maybe its OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste time and money. 【教师点评】 本文结构完整，段落清晰，要点齐全。时态使用正确，均用一般现在时。简单句、复合句交替使用，非谓语动词的使用均给本文增色不少。不足之处是两个观点的理由部分显得有些松散，没有用相关的过渡词，此外也出现了一些语法和搭配方面的错误。 因为后面有than by themselves，所以effective 要用比较级，前面要加上more。 in class 意思为“在课堂上”，class前不加冠词。 表示“一些……，一些……”，用some…，others 来表示。 ④动词原形不可以作表语，要用to make或making。 ⑤if应改为whether，因为if不可引导主语从句。 ⑥ be weak at中的at不可以省去，因为后面有宾语a certain subject。 【优秀范文】 Is Training Class Or Family Teacher Necessary? More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers on weekends, There are two different viewpoints about it. Some thinks it necessary. Firstly, its more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly, it can strengthen what is learnt in class. Besides, they can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary . For one thing , students can easily become dependent. For