2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题04 传统文化话题指导.docVIP

2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题04 传统文化话题指导 实例指导1—欢度春节Dear Bob, I’m glad to hear from you. You said that you are very interested in Chinese customs, especially the Spring Festival. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. On the New Year’s Eve, the whole family usually get together to have dumplings, set off fireworks, and watch TV programs. On the New Year’s Day, people always get up early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says Happy New Year to each other. Children can also get lucky money from their parents and other adults. When you take a walk in the streets, you will be struck by the sight of beautiful decorations. Some doors are decorated with red lanterns. This is something about our Spring Festival. And welcome to our country some day. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming 教师点评: 本文覆盖了写作任务中规定的所有内容,所使用的词汇和语法结构基本准确,语言连贯,结构完整,基本达到写作目的。但是仍有个别地方有所欠缺,有待修改和完善。 1. 文章没有段落,显得有些缭乱且思路不清。 2. 本文大多是单纯的叙述和介绍,缺少作者本人的情感和一些带有人情味的语句,读起来给人感觉颇为生硬。 成稿: Dear Bob, I’ve received your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you are very interested in our traditions, such as the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. Both adults and children look forward to this great day, just like Christmas Day in the West. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. The night before, the whole family usually gets together to have dumplings, set off fire-works, and watch TV. On New Year’s Day, people always get up early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says Happy new year to each other. I like the Spring Festival because I can get lucky money from my elders. Walking down the street, you will see many beautiful decorations. Many homes are decorated with red lanterns and other things. Isn’t the Spring Festival interesting? I’m sure that you will love it. I hope you can join us during a Spring Festival. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming 实例指导2—美国的节日习俗及文化写作任务:????假设你是学校英语爱好者俱乐部的会员,近期此俱乐部即将筹备一场会员聚会,主题