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郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（10）附参考范文 (201*·郑州质检) We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________ study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________ and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________ take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________ Theres many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________ such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________ However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________ every day. We hope that well be giving less homework8.________ and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________ that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________ 答案与解析： 1．healthy→health　这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。 2．by→on/upon　depend on/upon是固定搭配。 3．help→helps　这句话的主语是动名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。 4．but→and　feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。 5．去掉them　这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。 6．swim→swimming　应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。 7．去掉in　every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。 8．giving→given　这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。 9．take前加to　此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。 10．√ (2)(25 min.) (2012·浏阳一中月考)假如你是中学生李华。在一位名叫WolfDad的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。 Im the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong? 写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法； 2. 陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)； 3. 提出至少两条建议。 写作要求： 1. 短文字数不少于120(不含已写好的部分)； 2. 内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯； 3. 书写须清晰、工整。 ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________