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【广东省深圳市2014高考英语第一次调研考试】 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 What a bad day today! Tom suddenly fell ill and was sent to hospital by my neighbors. The doctor said he has been suffering lung cancer and his life is in danger! Everybody was shocked and felt a pity for this good man. Tom, who is a famous writer about 40 years old, lives just next door. He is kind and worm-hearted and always ready to give a helping hand to others when in need, so he enjoys great popularity in our neighborhood. He often came to my house to tell me how to write stories and encourage me with his own experience. He told me he was born in a poor family. As a little boy, he had a dream to become a famous writer. He overcame thousands of difficulties to have entered a university. After graduation, he began to publish story books, and up till now, he is very famous around the country. Unfortunately, when he was young, he just got into the habit of smoking and became a heavy smoker, which has ended up as an invisible killer of his health. 【写作内容 1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 2．以约120个词就“Health and Cause”为题谈谈你的想法，内容包括： （1）邻居们为汤姆感到惋惜的原因是什么？ （2）你从汤姆身上学到了什么? （3）你对身体健康与事业的看法。 【写作要求 1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接引用原文中的句子。 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） Health and Cause Tom, a kind and hardworking professional writer, suddenly fell ill, and was suffering from lung cancer due to the bad habit of smoking, which shocked his neighbors and made them feel sorry. All the neighbors felt it a pity for Tom because he is really a promising writer. He is so young and maybe it is just the beginning of his great career. Moreover, his great personality has gained their sincere respect. Unfortunately, the deadly cancer will stop him from his work. Tom has always been my good model, because he is so nice and outstanding in his career, but life was not easy for him on the way to being a successful writer. His strong will has helped him to have o