2016届高考英语写作提升复习课件13.pptVIP

第七节　高级词汇与高级句式 [技法指导] 　写作时，“高级词汇与高级句式”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一两处，也会为你的作文增添色彩。 一、使用高级词汇的三大技巧 1．标新立异 写作时要恰当得体地使用一些蕴含感情色彩，别人有可能想不到的词汇，恰当地求新求异。 As far as I’m concerned，parents’ much protection will do more harm than good to children’s future development. →As far as I’m concerned，parents’ limitless protection will do more harm than good to children’s future development.(2013·福建高考满分作文) With this experience，they will certainly like better to help others in future just like the laundrywoman has done. →With this experience，they will certainly prefer to help others in future just like the laundrywoman has done.(2014·广东高考满分作文) 2．短语优先 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad tried to earn the money. →Although it was not expensive，in order to buy me the gift，my dad made every effort to earn the money.(2014·重庆高分满分作文) What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. →What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(2013·重庆高考满分作文) 3．避免重复 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. [学以致用] 用较高级词汇代替加黑的词或短语 1．We all have the same chance. 答案　possess 2．We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. 答案　endless 3．I can no longer bear the way he speaks to us. 答案　put up with 4．He didn’t listen to what I said in the class. 答案　turned a deaf ear to 5．We’ll try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us. 答案　promote 6．The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses. 答案　challenging 二、使用高级句式的七大策略 1．使用被动语态 We will have selected about thirty volunteers to the Mars throughout the world by 2015. →About thirty volunteers will have been selected to the Mars throughout the world by 2015