高考英语基础写作nov.2006演示文稿.ppt

基础写作常见问题 5、题意理解错误。用条文式(1.2.3….) 1. There is but one China and Taiwan is a part of China. 2. Taiwan, the biggest island, with a population of 22,000,000, lies to the southeast of Fujian Province. 3. It is a very beautiful island. 4. Riyuetan Pool and Mount Ali are very famous places of interest. 5. Now, many Taiwanese come to the mainland, they visit their relatives and friends, and many of them build factories and run shops. 5、用词不当： …they regarded what they have done …the water disaster (flood) 拼写错误或笔误 …,which destroied the farmland …trees were importance for their living environment They regreted cutting down a lot of trees… …made up their mind to planted more trees and to Stop the flood happen again. …a heavy rain came to the western of China …so they cutted down the trees 拼写错误，卷面很花 7、信息点组织不符合逻辑 8、卷面不整洁 优点：经过一段时间的实践，已经有了5句话作文的意识，卷面更整洁，笔误越来越少，句子结构的准确性有了明显提高，速度更快。 假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获 奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，下表是这次活动的时间安排和活动内容。 [写作内容] 电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求以书信形式给予答复。 1、选择适合你的时间并说明理由； 2、解释你只能参加其中的两项活动（听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你  认为所有的活动都很有意义； 3、说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为 2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。 [写作要求] 1. 必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出。 Dear Sir or Madame, I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. 题型特点 能力要求 推荐步骤 认真审题 ( Read the topic carefully) 归纳排列信息点 (Find out the key points organize the messages in 5 sentences ) 草拟短语( Translate the phrases)确定短语和句型Think of the words, phrases, sentence structures you may use in writing. 连词成句(Make up sentences) Change the sentence structure where necessary; 组句成篇（润色） Add some conjunctions if needed. 检查修改 (adding and revising) 规范誊写 写作步骤 1、整合信息（按逻辑顺序整合成5个句子) ① 很高兴有机会参加活动(such activities as) ② 选择7月15日-22日或8月15日-22日并说明理由 ③ 只参加两项－听英语讲座和教外宾学中文，虽然所有活动都很有意义 ④ 说明选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。（整合） ⑤ 第3步 连词成句。 考虑句子结构的复杂性和句子内容的连贯性 第4步 连句成篇 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m glad to be invited to the English summer camp. ①Thank you very much f