2013年高考英语冲刺笔记整理.doc

2013高考英语冲刺笔记整理 12.27作文 1、包装 ①书写、习惯 ②格式（如书信右上角的时间）、结构（两头小、中间大、字数分配50-80-50） ↗长句↖ ③选词造句→短句←交错使用（15句，1/3写长句，30字左右，长句后接一两句短句过渡） ↘难句：强调句（最好使） 2、货真价实 ↗情景文字 ①不要跑题（跑题则一半分数以下），审题（三维）→提纲 ↘图或表上的信息 ②内容衔接（思维跨度不要太大）→总述和概述 ↘注意句子完整 ③方法多样性 一、大作文 （一）描绘：描述性语言、可加议论性观点 （二）议述：作者意图、个人评价 （三）总结（好的：预期一下未来；坏的：采取措施防治）/ 例证 具体讲： 描绘：总体背景介绍+细节刻画图或表上的信息 1、背景介绍 例一：人类克隆（试管婴儿 / 一个老婆四个一模一样的老公，“谁才是真的？”） The problem of the use of genetic technologies on human being has [caused/aroused public concern]/[loomed up/cropped up as a burning/challenging topic]. 例二：中国青少年犯罪比率上升（表） In the recent years, China experienced/witnessed/was plagued with an alarming increase in juvenile delinquency. 例三：人和社会的发展与环境的协调（寓意图、对比图） Currently, the topic/phenomenon of environment versus development has been in the limelight. Nowhere is the clash more evident/visible than in China, where the largest population confronts deforestation, pollution and acid rain on a range scale. 2、细节描绘 例：04年作文题 The (a set of) cartoon depicts a vivid scene in which an athlete dripping sweat is rushing to the end. Unquestionably/Undoubtedly/Beyond doubt, he wins the game but it is not the key message conveyed/implied/delivered by the picture. Apparently/Basically, the striking feature is that there is a line marked as both “the start” and “the end”, which means after the player came to the finishing-line, a new race is waiting to him. 另：对于图表描述不光要用上升下降等词，还要使用比较句型结构。 compare with/to …as much as that… more than, less than by 2000, [the number reach the peak/bottom]/[the largest number appeared]. 议述 引言句+分论点、事实信息罗列 如：As a matter of fact, the purpose of the drawer/drawing is to make us [pay high/more attention to…]/[rethink/have a fresh look at…]. 例一：兼职part-time job brainstorming I. Advantages: ↗pocket money ①make money →follow interest ↘tuition fees ↗on one’s own ↗life→make friends ②experience ↘custom, culture ↘work→lay a solid foundation for future career ↘be familiar with new fields II. Disadvantages: ①money: be so young that th