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* 课 前 词 汇 复 习 四 月 考 试 作 文 相 关 写 作 练 习 appy for in mainland delighted have a strong desire easy-going outgoing adapt to ideal hobby 申请 在大陆 高兴的 极其渴望 随和的 外向的 适应 理想中的 爱好 课 前 词 汇 复 习 假定你是李华，得知2013年香港大学要在大陆进行自主招生的消息后，有意向香港大学申请，参加自主招生考试。请用英语写一封自荐信，主要包括： 1，个人信息：男18岁，高三学生 2，性格、爱好与特长 3，学习情况 参考词汇：independent recruitment 四 月 考 试 作 文 设计思考： 第 1 段：情感表达 How excited I am to know ... 第 2 段：自我介绍 I am ... 第 3 段：殷切期待 Looking forward to ... 四 月 考 试 作 文 审题过程： 1.注意所给信息。 a.自我推荐 b.个人信息 c.性格、爱好与特长 d.学习情况 2.注意全文时态。 四 月 考 试 作 文 Clic to add title in here Click to add title in here Click to add title in here 1 2 1 2 3 4 5 条理清楚，意图明确 语法和标点正确，数字、日期等信息准确 尊重交际规则，尤其注意使用礼貌用语 全面表达自己的意思，尽可能完整地提供读者需要了解的所有情况 语言简洁，开门见山 6 书写工整，卷面整洁，设计合理 四 月 考 试 作 文 文章开头 文章开头 文章开头 Dear Sir, My name is Lihua, a high school student from Inner Mongolia. Im glad to get the news that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland, so I would like to apply for it. 文章开头 文章正文及结尾 文章正文及结尾 I am eighteen, studying in Senior 3. I am easy-going and good at communicating with others. Besides, I am quite independent and it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment. As a senior student, I have been working hard at my lessons and managed to get high grades. All these will enable me to continue my study in your university. Whats more, my hobbies are playing basketball and football and I am also good at playing the violin. Looking forward to your reply. 文章正文及结尾 开头错误及改进 I heard / learned that the Xing Gang University will held independent recruitment in land. I have heard / learned that Hong Kong University will have independent recruitment in mainland. How excited (it is) when I heard the news. How excited I was when I heard the news. Words cant describe how excited I was on hearing ...I very love Hong Kong University. Words cant describe how