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Writing paper analysis On the whole, you have a clear and good performance on the basic parts of an application letter for a job. And the beginning paragraph as well as the concluding one are especially well achieved in the perspective of fulfilling its function and purpose( such as illustrating the news of employment and applying for the position in the beginning and looking forward for an interview in the final paragraph). Yet the most importance part of the letter which can be summarized as the “personal statement of qualification” in the body will also to a great extend reflect your language skill reveals the following several problems: Lack of coherence Sample 1 I was graduated from Shanxi University. My major is English. My CET got 550. I have a rich experience for secretary because I did it as a part-time job for two years. I’m good at writing, using computer, speaking English. Especially speaking English. Sample 2 I will graduate on July, 2007 from Shanxi University. And I learned and seemed a lot of secretarial books and knowledge. I have gained valuable experience in a company where I worked every holiday. I am currently in the process of completing my degree. I have been searching for an employment opportunity where I can combine my practical experience. My speaking English is well that can easily communication with others. In addition to wherever I go, I readily accommodate to new circumstances. Sample 3 As you can see from my resume, my GRE and TOEFL scores are 2100 and 610 respectively, and I have a bachelor’s degree of China literature in Zhejiang University. As an literature, I have ever published several papers on the newspaper. On addition, I have worked for more than ten years in other company. I would like to travel abroad because I was interested in fresh objects. Unity Sample 1 As you can see from my resume, I am a graduate of Shanxi University, my major is history and I had I had been a teacher for five years. Besides I studied econo