《写作160篇》考研英语作文之“文化交流与融合”读者练习.docVIP

《写作160篇》考研英语作文之“文化交流与融合”读者练习 写作原文 A cartoon of which title is （此句of表示的从属关系本应为the title of a cartoon,而按本句理解即为a cartoon of title,从属关系有误，可改为：A cartoon whose title is） Starbucks coffee shop in the Forbidden City catch catches my attention, in which a servant is standing on his knees and holding up a cup of coffee to take on serve the Chinese empire in the Forbidden City. The servant is saying: Your majesty, coffee time, please. Obviously, this cartoon vividly shows us a an interesting phenomenon, which illustrate illustrates that with the development of the world economic economic是形容词，改为economy , more and more alien cultures come into China. And it also puts a question to us, that is, when the Chinese traditional culture（语序有误，traditional Chinese culture） meet meets with 去掉 alien cultures, how can we deal with it and what should we do to face with 去掉 the integrate culture and to protect ourselves in it. As the picture shows that the empire don’t know what is Starbucks coffee 注意语序，应为what Starbucks coffee is , we become more puzzled and confused with the variety of foreign products which is （are）brought by alien cultures as well. When China entered in （joined）WTO, Chinese culture get into the world step by step（根据两句的联系，应把When改为After）,at the same time, alien cultures merge in our traditional culture as well. Cultures from all over the world influence each other and personality 去掉，或把personality改为individuals , as someone called “culture integration”（改为which is called “culture integration” by someone较好）. It brings fresh air to us, however, whether it can be good for us depends on how we take advantage of it. Something good, we welcome; something bad, we refuse. Only if we calm down from the so-called culture hot and think over how to take advantage of culture integration, learn from the elite cultures and refuse those terrible cultures, we will only放在句首要倒装，改为will we embrace a（an）advanced culture tomorrow! 总体点评 文章基本完成了题目所规定的内容，包含一些内容要点，属于考研作文中的第二档作文。需注意： 1. 文章字数太