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实 战 篇 一、写作评阅时遵循三原则 语言第一位 (语言高级)； 内容第二位 (要点齐全)； 结构第三位 (文章分段)。 语言高级： 1.高级词汇和语法； 2.修辞手法； 3.有效的连词； 4.名人名言或谚语。 二、基本原则 词组优先；避免重复；慎用生词。 三、语法、修辞 1.肯定不如双否； 2.陈述不如倒装； 3.主动不如被动； 4.从句不如分词。 四、基础写作 抓要点，连句成篇，(多使用连词、非谓语、分词、介词短语和从句等，尤其要注意动词使用的正确性)。 五、高分技巧 造句功能重基础能力培养；简单句须有复杂结构相伴；复合句表述最讲恰到好处；联句成篇练习要天天不断；写作格式最好长短交错式；熟能生巧必定能妙笔生花。 六、备考思路 每天练笔熟悉句型；名句谚语铭记心上 注重一词多义形式；英汉互译强化记忆 限时练笔提炼思路；平时演练实战见效 细细审读要求题示；拟好提纲排列顺序 书写核对认真细心；措辞时态准确到位。 第六阶段 三十八、 文章概括 (记叙文) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. That’s right — sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy. The reason why Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists, who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round, furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? 【写作内容】 1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容； 2.然后以约120词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行讨论，内容包括： (1) 人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？ (2) 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？ (3) 你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？ 1. Who? 2. What happened to them? 3. Result? 4.Why(条件或原因)? Koalas. Someone kept waking them. They are unhappy and complaining. They are hugged /and photographed by tourists 5. Meaning or purpose? (意义) 整合所有信息： Think and do as animals. Koalas are unhappy and complaining because someone kept waking them, hoping to hug them or photograph with the