2016届《名师指津》英语高考二轮复习课件 第三部分 写作：1短文改错 第一组：记叙文.pptVIP

(六) I still remember one of my experience of hiking on the Mount Tai. Before the trip, I think it a piece of cake to get the top of the mountain. However, after reached the middle of it, I started to feel tired from. out reaching to thought experiences I was thirsty and my legs was so painful. Although I faced such a great difficulty, but I was determined to finish the trip as I was full convinced that nothing is impossible. fully were So I must moved on! Finally, I reached the top of the mountain. How happy I was and how a beautiful view I could enjoy on the mountain! what move (六)作者讲述爬泰山的经历。 1. experience→ experiences 因one of后加可数名词的复数。 2. think→ thought 全文是一篇记叙文，故谓语动词要用过去时。 3. 在get后加to 由固定短语get to意为“到达”可知。 4. reached→ reaching 因after是介词，后面的动词要用动名词。 5. from→ out 或去掉from由固定短语tired out意为“筋疲力尽的”可知，或tired作表语，显然from是多余的。 6. legs后的was→ were 主语legs是复数名词，故谓语也要用复数。 7. 去掉but 因前面有Although，此处不能再用but。 8. full→ fully 修饰形容词convinced要用副词。 9. moved→ move 情态动词后必须用动词原形。 10. how→ what 此为感叹句句型，感叹词后是名词(a beautiful view)，故要用what。 hiking n. 徒步旅行 thirsty adj. 口渴的 painful adj. 痛苦的 convinced adj. 深信的 a piece of cake 小菜一碟 be determined to do 下决心做 nothing is impossible 一切皆有可能 a beautiful view 美丽的景色 (七) Today is Mother’s Day. We wake up very early in the morning. My sister Jane and I planned to do anything for our mother to give her surprise. a something woke First, I put a bunch of flower on her desk and Jane went to the kitchen to made breakfast. After mother got up, she was surprising to see the beautiful flowers. surprised make flowers Then, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day, Mum! Thank you to everything that you have done for me. We love you forever.” Heard this, mother was moved to tears. Finally, we served her breakfast. She was proud of what her daughters had been done for her. Hearing us for (七)本文讲述母亲节作者和姐姐为母亲准备早餐的事情。 1. wake→ woke 此处讲述的是