托福写作批改点评第25期-新科技是否让生活更简单_托福写作.docxVIP

智课网TOEFL备考资料 托福写作批改点评 第25期:新科技是否让生活更简单_托福写作 Topic（题目）：  Does new technology make life easier?      Target text（文章正文）:    Time witnesses the striking change in ourlife. Accompanied with the technological advance, we never fail to look forwardto the simplification of our life. On the other hand, someone claim that ourlife is not simplified but complicated by such technology. However ,in myperspective, in spite of some exception, it is the new tools like the Internet,high-speed rail and mobile phones that allow us lead a uncomplicated life.    Above all, Internet affords us a more direct access to latestinformation. Needless to say, providing knowledge duly and expediently,Internet holds a strong connection with our life. As a sophomore majoring theeconomic, we never cease to highlight the significance of fresh information. Well,we just clicking the keyboard and surfing the Internet, the messages will flowinto our mind, something like the new policy of American government as well asthe exchanging rate between RMB and dollars, which are necessities in thepapers. However, you can imagine, without Internet, it should be arduous for usto obtain the up-to-date information and we should have to search other medialike newspapers or magazines for the items, but some of which might have beenout of date and ,accordingly, valueless.    Secondly, high-speed rail renders us a more expeditetransportation. In other words, when it comes to saving time and money theprogressive railway contributes so much. Ever year, especially during thespring festival, eager and anxious, millions of citizens including students andworkers go back home by train. Meanwhile, a survey suggests that in term of thetime they taking, compared with the common train, the high-speed trains couldshorten 1-3 hours per person. It means that offering less fatigue the fastertransportation could enable us to travel more easily and mirt