2014高考英语习书面表达高分策略之一.docVIP

高考英语书面表达高分策略之一 “两避免三适当” 在全国各省市高考题中，书面表达或写 作的分值从25 分到40 分不等，但有一点是 肯定的，那就是：书面表达的能力举足轻重。 如何用英语写出流畅、地道的文章是考生们 一直以来的渴望。笔者在多年的教学实践中 摸索出“两避免三适当” ，与大家共享。汉化英语——Hi, long time no see ——how are you ?? Im good!? I 两避免 、避免汉化英语，使句子更地道 请看学生的原句： 1. 有大约百分之十五命男孩和超过百 分之十的女孩想从事科研。 There are about 15% boys and over 10% girls want to do research . 2. 在过去的两年中唐山修了好多条宽 阔的马路。 In the past two years, Tangshan has built many wide roads. 分析：1. 本句一字不落地把汉语罗列成 了英语，是一个典型的“汉化句子”。错误的 根本原因在于：没有找到句子的主干，错误 的认为只要句子以“有”开头，就使用there b e句式，导致句子中出现了两个动词。正确 形式应是：About 15% boys and over 10% girls want to do research ; 2. 本句的错误在 于：没有找到句子的主干，且误用了时态和 语态。正确形式应是：In the past two years, many wide roads have been built in Tangshan 那么，如何才能写出地道的英语句子 呢？ 第一步:找出句子主干 第二步:确定主干的相关词汇 第三步：翻译句子主干（注意时态和语 态） 第四步添加修饰成分 请看下面的例子： 北京是中国的首都，有3000多年的悠 久历史。 第一步:找出句子主干 北京是首都 2) 北京有历史 第二步:确定主干的相关词汇 1) Beijing ,be, capital 2) Beijing ,have, history 第三步：翻译句子主干（时态用一般现 在时，语态用主动） 1) Beijing is the capital 2) Beijing has a history 第四步.?添加修饰成分(斜体部分为添 加成分） 1) Beijing is the capital o f China with a long history o f over 3,000 years. 2 .仔细检查:组篇成文后，浏览全文、进 行检查。 作文范文： Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt on the shabby campus and in the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 9 2) Beijing, the capital o f China，has a long history o f over 3,000 years. 当然也可以把两个主干变成并列形式： Beijing is the capital city of China and has a long history of over 3,000 years. 跟踪练习： 1 .害怕挨骂，男孩没关水龙头就跑了。 2 .今年南方的雪灾中有107人失去了 生命。 Possible ve