本校食堂.pptVIP

(主题句):总的来说,我们对食堂感到满意。 In general, we are content with the canteen. 无论何时进入食堂，我们总能看到大厅干净整洁。 Whenever we entre it, we can find the hall is clean and tidy. 菜肴看上去诱人，尝起来也美味。 The dishes look inviting and taste dilicious as well. 而且，工人们对待我们象朋友一样，这一点使得我们感到开心。 What’s more, the workers treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy. (主题句)：然而，在我看来,有一些方面需要改进。 However, As far as I am concerned, there are some ways that need improving. 首先，我们感觉饭菜的价格有点贵。 First of all, we feel the price of the meals is a little high. 而且，我们只能吃有限种类的菜肴，每周几乎没有变化。 Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. 而且，食物品种如此少。结果，我们厌倦于日复一日吃同一道菜。 Besides, there are so few kinds of food. As a result, we are tired of eating the same dish day after day. 而且，我们经常不得不站队很久才买到饭菜。 In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we get the meal. 而且，为了买到饭菜，我们经常不得不在队伍里久等。 In addition, in order to get the meal, we have to wait in the queue for quite a long time. 亲爱的校长，你要知道时间对于我们学生而言是何等的珍贵。 Dear Mr. Principle, you know how precious time is to us student. 因此，我可否建议采取措施解决这些问题以便我们大家都能在校享受每一顿饭菜。 Therefore, may I suggest that measures should be taken to solve these problems so that all of us can enjoy our meals at school? 你认为有必要采取措施解决这些问题吗？ Do you think it is necessary to take some measures to solve these problems? 谢谢你予于考虑。 Thanks for your consideration. 如蒙考虑,不胜感激. I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions. 参考范文: Dear Principle, I am a senior student of our school. I’d like to say something the canteen service in our school. In general, we are content with the canteen. Whenever we entre it, we can find the hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look inviting and taste dilicious as well. What’s more, the workers treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy. However, As far as I am concerned, there are some ways that need improving. First of all, we feel the price of the meals is a little high. Besi