写作之闪光替换词答案.ppt

写作常用之闪光替换词 下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项： 1.适当用被动代替主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I 比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. 2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在主语，动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。 考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等 二．经典范文： Computer and I 1. I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly 替换 very thrilling 替换 exciting sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. google 替换 search an army of ,a sea of替换 a lot of 2. The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情； increasing popularity 替换 more and more popular coincident with … 非常地道的词汇，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换 With … advancement 替换 development pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into appeal to sb. 替换 sb. be interested in sth. growing individuals 替换 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型， 说某事是毫不夸张的 in large measure替换to a great degree 3. For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. For a start 替换 To begin with We can, freely, s