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IELTSWRITTING Introduction第一课—介绍大饼和桌子Zo?Who am I?（Chiemsee，又译基姆湖 德国慕尼黑巴伐利亚州)Your site hereG 类A 类ListeningAcademic ReadingGeneral ReadingAcademic Writing2 Tasks(150 and 250 words)60minutesGeneral Writing2 Tasks(150 and 250 words)60 minutesSpeaking介绍雅思写作考试9:00开考，11点—写作！ Task 2 大作文 Task 1 小作文40 minutes陈述观点250 words2/3分数20 minutes分析图表150 words1/3 分数Task 1 (5分) + Task 2 (7分)= 5*1/3 + 7*2/3= 6.5 分【Scoring】评分标准Task Response 任务的完成情况----内容Coherence and Cohesion 连贯与衔接 ----结构Lexical Resource 词汇资源 ----词汇Grammatical range and Accuracy 语法结构和准确性----语法 Task Achievement Task 1(Band 9) fully satisfies all the requirements of the task 完全满足任务的所有要求 clearly presents a fully developed response 对于题目的回应清晰而完整Coherence and Cohesion Task 2(Band 9) uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention 不留痕迹的衔接 skillfully manages paragraphing 分段得体Lexical ResourceTask 1 (Band 9) uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; 词汇使用广泛，自然而老道 (避免超高级词汇） rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’ 极少出现小错误比如“笔误”So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem! write calm logical sentence We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated. do not get religious雅思写作考试常见【词法】错误分析-1 Some teachers dont know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 【No abbreviations】不要用缩写 don’t / shouldn’t / can’tdo not / should not / cannot雅思写作考试常见【词法】错误分析-2The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed.【US and UK spelling 】只可取其一【AmE】 neighbor analyze【BrE】 neighbour analyse雅思写作考试常见【词法】错误分析-3Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy.Numerous / a host of 学术写作： formal useChildren in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.Increasingly Serious crimes harm peoples lives.Sever criminal act damage / destroy / impair humanbeing – individuals. The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.outweighGramm