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On Writing 一、上海近年中考写作题型 1．文字提示写作 04年中考“毕业时分” Leaving School 06中考 “我的梦想” My dream 07中考 “我不喜欢…” The things I hate to do… 2．看图写作 05年 中考“成长的烦恼与欢乐” 3．看表格写作 二、06写话评分标准： (1) 作文共14分，其中文采（组织结构）2分，内容和语言各6分。 “文采好”指的是：不写废话，句句表达实在的思想；无或少见语法错误，词汇运用恰当，文笔流畅，多见好句型和习惯表达用语。同时，其他两项得分总和达11－12分，就能获得2分。略有逊色者（其他两项得分总和达10分）可获1分。对于那些表面上似无大错，但句子太过简单， 则与文采分无缘。 (2) 错误认定及扣分标准： ① 离题指远离所给命题，扣6分。偏题指漏必写的内容，少一点扣一分。 ② 词数：每少5个词扣0. 5分（不足5个按5个计算），以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。 ③ 拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复扣分。 ④ 语法：同③。 ⑤ 标点符号、大小写：同③， 但扣分总和不超过一分。 06中考作文评析 14分作文 Everybody has his own dream. So do I. My dream is to be a tour guide. Some people may think that it’s tiring to be a tour guide. But I don’t think so because I can visit many places of interest around the world and I can learn different cultures and customs. Besides, I also can meet different people in different places. So I really want to be a guide. It is an exciting job. From now on, I must study geography well. I think through my hard work, my dream will come true in the future. (97 words) （内容6 语言6 结构2） My dream is to be an English teacher. I like teaching children. I think I will be proud of myself. If I become a teacher, I will be friendly, kind and understanding. In order to make my students happy all the time, I must be a good teacher. To make my dream come true, I should study hard now. It’s necessary for me to learn much knowledge. If my dream comes true, I will try my best to be a responsible teacher. (82 words) （内容6 语言6 结构2） 11-12分作文 My dream is to become an artist. I enjoy drawing very much. Drawing is my favorite hobby. To make my dream come true, I often draw something. I drew both animals and flowers. My teacher said that I can draw very good. I was happy. If my dream comes true, I will draw different cities because they have different cultures and customs. (62 words) （内容6 语言5 结构1） 8分作文 I have a dream. My dream is to be a man doctor. I like it very much because I want to help a lot of