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翻译1：经常做运动会提高人的自信? 错误的句子：Exercise?regularly?can?rise?ones?confidence.? 错误1?Exercise?如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰?错误2?rise?不及物动词? 正确的句子：Regular?exercise?can?increase?ones?self-confidence.?句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence)?可以用定语从句扩充：? Participating?in?sports?frequently?can?boost?peoples?confidence,?which?is?important?not?only?to?the?youth?but?also?to?the?elderly.? 注：?不可以说“regular?doing?exercise”，因为形容词regular?不可以修饰doing? 中文翻译：经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心，这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。? 翻译2：?依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力（mental?arithmetic）。? 错误的句子：Rely?heavily?on?calculators?will?have?negative?impact?on?human?beings`?mental?arithmetic.? 错误1?rely?是动词，不能充当主语?错误2?impact?可数名词，要有冠词。? 错误3?human?beings?多余，不是人类莫非是动物么？?正确的句子：? Relying?heavily?on?calculators?will?have?a?negative?impact?on?mental?arithmetic.?句子结构：? 主语+及物动词+宾语(impact)?也可以用现在分词扩充：? The?excessive?reliance?on?calculators?is?likely?to?have?an?adverse?impact?on?childrens?mental?arithmetic?and?pose?a?threat?to?their?intellectual?development.? 中文翻译：过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力有负面影响，对孩子的智力发展有威?胁。? 翻译?3：?很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里（male-dominated?world）找工作。?错误的句子：A?number?of?girks?are?not?willing?to?hunting?jobs?in?the?male-dominated?world?错误?1?willing?to?do?something?固定搭配? 错误?2?a?number?of?在这里感觉是在某个地方，有一些女孩不愿意做什么。?错误?3?定冠词不恰当，因为世界上男人居多的行业有很多，不可能特指? 正确的句子：Many?girls?are?not?willing?to?seek?employment?in?a?male-dominated?world.?句?子结构：? 主语+系动词+表语(willing)?也可以用状语从句扩充：? Numerous?women?are?unwilling?to?find?employment?in?a?male-dominated?world?because?they?can?face?barriers?to?top-level?promotion.? 中文翻译：?很多女孩不愿意在男人为大多数的行业找工作，因为她们会面临在高职位升迁?中的阻碍。? 翻译4：环境问题已经成为公众关心的焦点。? 错误的句子：environmental?problem?has?been?the?focus?of?public?concern.?错误1?problem?可数名词，要加冠词或者复数? 错误2?be?是表示“是”的意思，强调状态，要用“become”，强调变化? 正确的句子：The?environmental?problem?has?become?the?focus?of?public?concern. 句子结构：? 主语+系动词（become）+表语（the?focus）? 拓展的句子：The?environmental?problems?has?become?the?focus?of?public?concern,?for? example,?greenhouse?emissions.?That?is?why?the?government?limits?people?to?use?private?cars?in?urban?areas.? 错误1：同位