高考英语书面表达最后指导课件.pptVIP

2006书面表达（江苏卷） 据报道：2008年北京奥运会选拔约十万名志愿为之服务。请你以“Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讨论志愿者应该做什么，不应该做什么。短文应包括下表中的内容。 06年江苏卷书面表达范文 06年江苏卷书面表达范文 06年江苏卷书面表达范文 06年江苏卷书面表达范文 * Writing steps 1．审题要细 把握好文体、人称、和时态。 2．编拟提纲 简洁列出要点，防漏或过度发挥。 3．表达 用“拿手句”,忌生般硬套、胡编乱套。 4．扩展句子，并连句成文。 5．仔细检查 文体格式、人称、时态、语态；要点是否遗漏，是否正确；大小写、拼写是否正确; 上下文是否连贯，过渡是否自然，语言是否得体；句子结构是否多样化等。 Standards of grading Standards of grading 书面表达非常注重语篇的衔接与连贯。 文章要有一定的“文采” Teaching Aims 1. Have some idea of cohesion (结合） and coherence (连贯)in English writing. 2. Take some measures and try to use them freely. 注意：1.对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥。 2. 词数120左右。短文中已写好部分，不计入词数。 3.参考词汇：image 如果你成为志愿者，你还应该做什么，不应该做什么。（由考生自己拟定） 3. 不损害祖国的形象 3.介绍中国历史和文化 2. 不忘履行自己的职责 2. 坚守岗位 1. 避免不得体的言行 1.待人礼貌友好 Don’ts Dos 06年江苏卷书面表达范文 Dos and Don’ts for the 2008 Olympic Volunteers It is reported that about 100,000 people will be chosen as volunteers for the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing. What should the volunteers do and what should they not do? Firstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behavior. Secondly, they should stick to their posts, offering good services, satisfying any reasonable needs and being ready to help those in difficulty, and never fail to do their duty. Thirdly, they should introduce the Chinese culture and history to foreigners so that they may know China better, and never say or do anything that harms the image of our motherland. 06年江苏卷书面表达范文 If I have the honor to be chosen as a volunteer, besides the above, I will work hard and creatively, but never be lazy. I will follow the law and discipline, but never break them. I will take the opportunity to make friends with the athletes and visitors, and help make the 2008 Olympic Games a great success. Firstly, they should be polite and friendly to the athletes and visitors from all over the world, and avoid improper behavior