2008高考英语书面表达指导课件.pptVIP

Grade 5 (Very Good): (21—25) All the points covered. Various grammatical structures and words. Efficient conjunctive phrases to make the whole passage consistent and compact. Sentence Varietyadvanced grammatical structure The Mississippi River is one of the longest rivers in the world，and in spring time it often overflows its banks，and the lives of many people are endangered. The Mississippi River，which is one of the longest rivers in the world，often overflows its banks in the spring time，endangering the lives of many people. * 已找到的住处 11 芳草街 下一站 建新华文学校 2003年 NMET 书面表达 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文,来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息,写信介绍住房的情况,并告知住房面积为25平方米,月租500元。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 参考词汇：房租 rent (n.) 1 2 3 Dear Bob, Thanks for your litter. I’m glad that you’re coming to the new building Huawen school for learning Chinese. I was fond of you a horse . It is closed to your school in No. 11 Fan Chao Street.Your horse is in two flours. It have 3 rooms, a chicken, a restroom and a men’s room. In the rest room , it has a bed, a long chair and a dest, the horse is 25 square miles. You pay 500 for a mouth. If you go to school , you pick up 11 bus and take down the next stop. I wish you would be like this. Yours Li Hua letter. to learn have found flat close Fangcao flat Jianxin Chinese School kitchen, bedroom and a bathroom. bedroom there’s sofa desk. The flat meters. The rent is 500 yuan a month. can take a No.11 bus and get off at hope you will on the 2nd floor with Find the errors and correct them - Big Es: 语法结构 时态 语态 语气 连词 要点 Small Es: 介词 冠词 标点 拼写 Dear Bob, I’ve found an apartment that is simply satisfactory! The apartment available is on the 3rd floor of a uni