1 写作中语言要求1 作中语言要求.pptVIP

Part I 1. 内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点 作文考试要求考生根据所提供的写作提纲完成一篇短文，因此，评分标准的第一项即要求文章切题，并包括提纲的全部要点。 2. 表达清楚，文字连贯 文章要做到表达清楚，文字连贯,就必须根据提纲确立不同的主题句并使整个段落凝聚在一起，流利地表现段落所要表达的思想。为了使文章清楚，连贯(coherence)，我们可以用一些关联词（transitional words and phrases），引导读者的思维从一个句子过渡到另一个句子。 3. 基本上无重大语言错误，仅仅有个别小错误 三个要求中，有两个是和语言有密切关系的：表达清楚，文字连贯；基本上没有重大语言错误． 因此，有必要对四级英语写作语言方面加以分析和训练．从选词，到组句，再到成段逐一分析． Part II 如何选词、组句? I. 选词：CET- 4作文中的“亮点”，成为作文得高分之必须． A. 选词的要求 １．准确贴切．如： 1）客人们在共进晚餐后都放松下来，也随便多了． After a good dinner together, all the guests relaxed and became quite familiar (careless ×). 用词准确贴切,主要是选用同义词,近义词的问题.因此要想准确贴切,就必须很好地辨析它们. 英文中同义词非常丰富.通过有效地互换同义词来取代上文中出现过的词,使文章的语言丰富多彩,避免重复和单调. 如: 2）With the publication of the novel, he became famous as the greatest writer living then, and he has been more and more famous ever since. He is also becoming more and more famous with Chinese readers. ----- 用同义词互换改为： With the publication of the novel, he became famous as the greatest writer living then and his reputation as a major American author has been on the increase ever since. He is now also becoming more and more popular with Chinese readers. 该句中选用了词性不同但意义接近的词／词组来表达同样的意思，显得语言生动而丰富． 2.明白易懂．如： 即：选用的词含义必须确定（语体：正式，一般，口语；词义：原义，引申义）； 　　避免生造词语； 　　避免滥用方言俚语等．如： wanna, gonna, ’cause等最好避免在说明文及议论文中使用． 3) After the outbreak of SARS, some people are determined to engage themselves in regular sports activities so that they can stay healthy (sound ×． 一般用于口语中，“健康健全的没有任何病的”). 4）To be an all-round student (三好学生)　(a three good student ×) is always a symbol of achievement for Chinese students． 5）In big cities, the migrant workers (农民工) (farmer-workers ×) are becoming the main labor force. 6）Work hard and make progress every day. (好好学习天天向上．) (Good good study, day day up. ×) 3. 形象生动． 活用词义：选用含义比较形象具体的词来代替含义比较抽象的词．如： ７) He is kind and honest. (比 He is a good man.更具体．) ８) No one witnessed (比saw更具体) the bank being broken into. ９) No one could survive (比live更形象) in the modern world without money. 活用词义还可以通过