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Part Ⅰ Writing Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Creating a Healthy Internet. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below. 1. 随着社会和经济发展．网络成为了每个人必不可少的获取信息的工具 2．但是，在网络上也出现了一些不健康的因素，如垃圾信息、黄色网站、虚假新闻、网络炒作等 3．我们应采取措施制止这些，并建立—个健康的网络环境 The Importance of Creating a Healthy Internet ______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ 这道题您没有回答 答案:The Importance of Creating a Healthy Internet [范文与解析] [1] With the development of our society and economy, the Internet becomes a necessary tool for everyone to obtain information. [2] However, there are also some unhealthy contents in the Internet, such as trash information, pornographic pictures and video clips, fabled news, and annoying online drumbeatings. [3] I think it is high time that we made efforts to create a healthy Internet. [4] First, creating a healthy Internet helps to eliminate online crimes. [5] Second, creating a healthy Internet helps to protect children. Nowadays many children have access to computers and the Internet, so they might be exposed to unhealthy contents and might be misled. [6] Third, a healthy Internet brings great convenience to our lives, while an unhealthy one does great harm to us. When trash information and online drumbeating jam the network, we will certainly spend much more time to search for the information we really need. [7] In one word, creating a healthy Internet should be Netizens common responsibility, and lets all contribute to a clean and harmonious virtual environment. [写作指南] 作文标题是“创建健康网络环境的重要性”，这已经表明，写作的重点是说明“为什么要创建健康的网络环境”。但所给出的outline没有体现这一点。仅仅根据outline动笔，恐怕写不出好作文来。 提纲的第1点和第2点都址说背景，是为我们要论述的论点服务的；第3点指向“措施”，也与论点有关。但是，以这三点中的任何一条为中心，都有可能偏题。 那么该如何做这篇文章呢?不仅要把提纲中的内容纳入，而且还要特别沦述“创建健康网络环境的重要性”。要思考那么儿条“重要性”出来，才能有话可说，切合中心主旨。洲练从不同的角度考虑健康网络的重要忭，培养良好的思维能