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广州市2016高考英语二轮短文改错精练（2）及答案 短文改错 　　Dear Ralph, 　　I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would 1. _______ 　　describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, 2. _______ 　　it seems always difficult for me to do things well as3. _______ 　　them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as4. _______ 　　a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. 5. _______ 　　Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they 6. _______ 　　don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other7. _______ 　　very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8. _______ 　　once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t 9. _______ 　　seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? 10. _______ 　　Yours, 　　Xiao Wei 　　答案及解析 　　1. of改为from。of表示所属意义， 此处应为“来自一个小城镇”。 　　2. quietly改为 quiet。describe后接名词或代词+ as +名词或形容词， 其中as +名词或形容词作宾语补足语， 表示“把…描写成什么/什么样子”。 　　3. well前加as。as well as“跟…(做得)一样好”。 　　4. to改为at。laugh to...意为“对…大笑”。laugh at...意为“嘲笑”， 有明显的、 有意的敌意的含义， 根据后文and see me as a fool， 故应用laugh at才对。 　　5. 此行无错误。 　　6. that改为why。that引导宾语从句， 本身无意义， 只起连接作用。 　　7. talked改为talk。整篇文章叙述的都是现在的情况。改为现在时， 使其与上下文一致。 　　8. stranger改为strangers。与句子主语we一致。 　　9. since改为but。根据上下文， 前后句之间为转折关系。 　　10. 删除about。tell的结构为：tell sb. sth. “告诉某人某事”， 表示直接意义； tell sb. about sth. “告诉某人有关某事的某些内容”， 表示间接意义。 第一节：短文改错(共10小题假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked