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分析利弊型议论文的写作模板 写作指导：写作时可分三步走：引出问题、分析利弊、提出自己的观点。 1.引出主题（存在的现象）：In recent years, … has been popular. 2.论述利的方面：There are many advantages in________(现象). First, ________. Second,_____________. Third, ________________. 论述弊的方面：However, there’re some disadvantages. ____________(弊端一). Besides, ______________(弊端二). Also,____________ 3.发表自己的意见 as far as I am concerned….. 1.洋快餐在中国深受欢迎，尤其受到青少年以及儿童的欢迎 2.首先，很方便，可以节约时间，店里干净舒适 Firstly, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time and the environment of fast food restaurant is both clean and comfortable 3.另外，服务很周到，食品质量有保证 In addition, it has excellent service and the quality of the food is guaranteed Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers 5.我认为它对身体非常不好，因为它没有提供均衡的饮食. As far as I am concerned , I think it is very harmful to our health because it doesn’t offer balanced diet. 4.然而，营养（nutrition）方面不尽如人意 However, the nutrition is far from satisfactory, because it doesn’t offer the balanced diet Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. Because it is very convenient and saves lots of time and the environment of fast food restaurant is both clean and comfortable. In addition, it has excellent service and the quality of food is guaranteed. However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory, for it is usually not a balanced diet and low in nutrition value. So in my opinion, fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. (各抒己见） Exchange and discuss your partner’s composition, then give each other a score according to the following criteria. Criteria（标准） Mark Content（内容） （是否用5句话表达了全文要点） 0 – 5 分 Language（语言） （句子结构及用词是否得当） 0– 8 分 Coherence（连贯） （是否用了恰当的词语来衔接句子） 0 – 2 分 Pair work The fast food is very popular in China,expeclly the teenages and children.The fast food is cut down our tim