广东省2013届高三英语二轮复习专题训练：写作21.docVIP

广东省2013届高三英语二轮复习专题训练：写作21 第一节 基础写作 写作要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。第二节 读写任务阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Let children learn to judge their own work. A child learning to talk does not learn by being corrected all the time; if corrected too much, he will stop talking. He notices a thousand times a day the difference between his language and others’ language. Bit by bit, he makes the right changes to make his language like other people’s. In the same way, children learn to talk, run, climb, ride a bicycle by comparing their own behaviors with those of more skilled people, and slowly make the needed changes. But in school teachers never give a child a chance to find out his mistakes for himself, even fewer chances for him to correct himself. They do it all for him. Teachers act as if the student would never notice a mistake if they did not point out it to him. They act as if the student would never correct it unless he was made to. Soon he becomes dependent on the teachers. Let the student do it himself. Let him work out, with the help of other children if he wants it, what this word means and what the answer is to that problem. 【写作内容】 以约30个词概况短文的要点； 然后以约120个词就“学生的学习错误该不该纠正”的主题发表看法，内容包括： （1）以自己的学习生活为例，简述你在日常学习生活中常犯的错误； （2）你是如何看待自己的错误的； （3）老师是如何对待你的错误的； （4）你对老师的做法的看法及理由。 【写作要求】 1.作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。 2.标题自定。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。 基础写作 参考范文： Nwhich the students in our class have different opinions. Those in favor of this practice say they can express their feelings and strengthen their friendships by sending gifts to each other, and they will keep the gifts forever to recall the unforgettable days they have spent together. While other students believe it’s a waste of time and money to exchange gifts, especially when the college entrance examination is around the corner. Besides, it’s not a must to do this because nowadays people have many ways to communicate and will have chance to meet each other in the