2014届高考英语二轮写作基础与技巧指导讲义2.docVIP

2014届高考英语二轮写作基础与技巧指导讲义2 一． 发言稿/通知 假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括： 部分同学的饮食习惯 良好的饮食习惯 个人看法 不吃早餐 爱吃零食 偏食 饮食过量 饮食多样化 饮食定时定量 重要性：有助于身体健康…… 注意：1.发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;3.词数：100左右. 4.参考词汇:偏食be particular about food??? 零食? snackDear friends, As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. __________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you!【思路点拨】 ?? 由题目要求可以确定写作的话题和目的是“讨论同学们的饮食习惯，准备发言稿”。从表格内容中可以获得表达的要点： ?? 1）部分同学的饮食习惯：不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食；饮食过量等， (不难看出，该部分为不良习惯，是要否定和反对的) ；可以参考如下表达方式：…to like to have snacks; be particular about food;? … go to school without breakfast; to eat or drink too much; All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our health.等。 ?? 2）养成良好的饮食习惯：饮食多样化；饮食定时定量等，提供健康饮食样例；（该部分是要提倡的良好行为）；可以参考如下表达方式：we should have various healthy diets; … include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food; we’d better have meals regularly.等。 3）个人看法：健康饮食很重要，有助于身体健康与生长等。要养成良好的饮食习惯。可以参考如下表达方式：… to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body; Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better. ? ??另外，提示的内容很好的揭示了文章的主题，也为考生继续写作提供了很好的开端和参考，考生要顺着提示的内容，搞好衔接或过度。最后，还要注意参考词汇，这也一般是文章必定要包括的内容。 【范文和评析】 Dear friends, ???? As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s a very important for us to from healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us like to have snacks, and some others are particular about food. Some even often go to school without breakfast while some eat or drink too much. All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our health. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly. In my opinion, we should try