（优化版）2017年高考英语二轮复习 专题09 短文改错（练）（含解析）.docVIP

专题9 短文改错 [2015·全国卷Ⅰ] 第四部分写作（共两节满分35分） 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it . 【答案】 76. think –thought 77. countryside前加the 78. or—and 79. on—with 80. been去掉 81. seriously—serious 82. airs—air 83. much—many 84. found—find 85. your—our [2015·全国卷] 第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分） 第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。???? 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；??????????????2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,?How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ? Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 【答案】 71. parent改为parents 72. on改为in 73. very去掉 74. looks改为looking 75. where改为that 或者去掉 where 76. begun改为began 77. telling改为told 78. a改为the 79. saw后加his 80. terrible改为terribly 75