2016届高考英语写作提升教学课件2.pptVIP

第十二节　记叙文 记叙文写作时注意以下几点： 1．内容完整，脉络清楚 写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展、一直到结束的整个过程，然后再搜集、选取素材。一般来说，记叙文包括六大要素，即“六何”——“何人于何时何地为何如何做何事”。写这类文章我们要从六个方面(when，where，who，what，why，how)入手，将题目所要求的全部要点交代清楚。记叙文的目的就是叙述一个经过，因此要有头有尾，自始至终，确保内容的完整。 2．中心突出，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。在写作过程中我们要突出重点，详细叙述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写、粗述那些非关键的次要情节。 3．语言灵活，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事、物描写得具体生动，可读性强。 [好开头] 1．Although it happened three years ago，I never forgot the evening party. 尽管那发生在三年前，我将永远忘不了那场晚会。 2．Last week we had an amusing experience. 上周，我们进行了一次有趣的活动。 [好结尾] 1．I learnt a lot from it. 从中我学到了很多。 2．This was really an unpleasant trip I had ever had! 这是我曾经有过的一次最不愉快的旅行。 [好句子] 1．由于大雨所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。 ①All the flights had been cancelled because of the heavy rain，so all the passengers had to take the train. ②All the flights had been cancelled because of the heavy rain；as a result，all the passengers had to take the train. ③All the flights having been cancelled because of the heavy rain，all the passengers had to take the train. 2．一听见有人呼救，他毫不犹豫地跳入河中。 ①On hearing someone calling for help，he did not hesitate to jump into the river. ②Hardly had he heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation. ③No sooner had he heard someone calling for help than he jumped into the river without hesitation. 3．对于这起交通事故的原因，我认为卡车司机应该负主要责任。 ①As for the cause of the accident，I think the driver of the lorry should be to blame. ②As far as the cause of the accident is concerned，I think the driver of the lorry should be to blame. ③As far as the cause of the accident is concerned，I think，it is the driver of the lorry who should be to blame. [题目要求] (江西高考)星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括： 1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)； 2．活动的过程； 3．你对于这次活动的评论。 精彩变式 ①用现在分词的完成式作时间状语进行改写 ②用过去分词短语作伴随状语进行改写 ③用“be＋of＋抽象名词”进行改写 ④将否定词置于句首，用倒装句进行改写 升级·五档作文 In order to encourage the student