Lack of Unity.pptVIP

Lack of Unity Made by He Yongmei, Yao Han, Tan Zekai Unity What is Unity? Every sentence should contain a central idea (一致性原则). Examples Building could be constructed high to save land, and also some constructions are repetition. This sentence has two different ideas, so it is a poor sentence and confusing. Unity Identify whether the following sentences are good ones or lacking of unity. E.g. 1 English is difficult to learn and to become proficient we must use it often. Answer: lack of unity (exclusiveness of main idea, 主题思想的唯一性) (and 连接 “to learn” 和“to become proficient”, 两者表达的意思不一致, 违背了主题思想的唯一性) Unity How do you revise it? English is difficult to learn and no one can learn it without effort. E.g. 2: Giving birth to a child, I found another job. Answer: lack of unity (relativity of main idea, 主题思想的相关性) “Giving birth to a child” 和 “I found another job”不相关,违背了主题思想的相关性. Unity How do you revise it? After giving birth to a child, I found another job. 加上了”after” 后,句子便有了时间的连贯和动作的顺承. Do you know what Unity here refers to ?In order to let you understand it, I list these four sentences. Born in a small town in Anhui Province, Wang became a taxi driver last year. b. This CD is a collection of folk songs, and many old people like folk songs. c. Shakespeare is the best playwright. d. In my opinion, Lin is the most hardworking student. The following sentences have all been improved. Compare those sentences and find out what unity means. Wang was born in a small town in Anhui Province. He became a taxi driver last year. b. This CD is a collection of folk songs that many old people like. c. Shakespeare is the best playwright in English language. d. In my opinion, Lin is the most hard working student in our school. * idea one idea two *