2009广东高中考试英语写作讲评.pptVIP

2009高考作文讲评;基础写作;[写作内容] 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容： 1．采访的时间、对象和主题； 2．中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3．专家解读。 [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 ;审题;5.单词和短语： 1.）近视n. 2.) 近视的adj. 3.)采访 4.）上周末 5.）原因 6.）复杂 7.）治愈 8.）过度用眼;9.）参加户外活动 10.）握笔 11.）与…有关 12.) 发生率略高于50%： 13.）专家解读： ;参考范文;Unit 7 读写任务; The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience．Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable．How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? *考拉即树袋熊 ;[写作内容] 1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容； 2．然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括： (1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照； (2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 [写作要求] 1．在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不 得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 [评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。 ;审题; The koalas in Australia are always awoken from deep sleep because the tourists want to hug and photograph them, which makes koalas unhappy. The government is now trying to ban photographing with animals.;正文部分;　一些句子参考： 　　　　The opposite of love is indifference.（经典引用） 　　　　The opposite of love is indifference. Sometimes, we human being may ignore the feeling of animals, not caring their lives in many ways. For example, … 　　　　People should create a harmonious environment for both men and animals so that we benefit from each other mutually. 　　　　Animals also need love, care and understanding. 　　　　; As we all know, most tourists like taking photos with animals while they visit zoos. The reasons are as follows: Firstly, most tourists enjoy showing such pictures to their friends and family, when they come back from their traveling. Secondly, some people want to show people how t