书面表达高分策略4.ppt

书面表达高分策略;一、 运用情感性词语;If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help. 句中用more than表达“非常”的含义，体现了作者十分乐于帮助他人的真挚之情。 That young man recommended himself to us without hesitation. 介词短语 without hesitation表达了年轻人想要介绍自己的迫切之情。 ;However, when we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. 此处用shock强调了“我们”目睹课满地的垃圾之多后的震惊。;1. “to one’s+情感类名词”结构。 常用于该结构中的情感类名词有 astonishment, amazement, annoyance, delight, joy, relief, regret, satisfaction, surprise等，有时可在该结构前加much加强程度。在书面表达中适当选用该结构，能得到以情动人、增强文章感染力的效果。例如： ; When Paul got home, he said to his grandpa, “Birds also need friends!” To his delight, his grandpa agreed. To his delight在句中的运用，使得保罗的喜悦之情跃然纸上。 Usually John would be late for meeting. But this time, much to my surprise, he arrived on time. 在 to my surprise前面加上much,更体现了作者倍感意外的心情。 ; 2. “A is to B what C is to D”结构。该比喻结构用于强调某事物的重要性，在书面表达中运用该结构进行恰如其分的比喻，可表现出作者的情感世界。例如： Air is to us what water is to fish. There is no doubt that we should take measures to keep air and water clean. 该句表达了作者对生活环境的关注，号召人们行动起来保持空气和水源的清洁。;3. 情感性插入语，如“ what’ better, what was worse, worse still, to make matters worse, I’m sure, I’m afraid等。例如： I returned home very late, and what was worse, I could not find my house key. what was worse不仅起衔接作用，而且流露出作者当时非常糟糕的心情。 当然，表达情感的结构远远不止以上这些，同学们在学习过程中应注意积累，并在书面表达中有意识的运用，必然使文章增色不少。;三、采用情感性语句;Sometimes it is just such little things that make a big difference. 该强调句体现了作者只能更是从小事做起的内心感悟。;四、其他体现情感的表达方式;2. 运用虚拟语气。例如： Therefore, it’s high time we did something about it. 该句运用虚拟语气表达了作者的迫切心情。 ; 下面我们通过一篇书面表达的写作范例，看看如何在书面表达中以情动人，表情达意显不凡。; ;Dear Sally, How is everything with you now? I’m sure you are back safe with your family again._________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua ;【参考范文】 Dear S