雅思OG写作Test2Task2解析.docx

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思OG写作Test2 Task2解析 摘要： 在准备雅思写作的过程中，不仅要关注词义本身，还要结合例句，看看这个词汇在句子中到底如何使用，和什么样的词汇搭配，以构成短语。这样才能让各种词汇以正确的形式，呈现在答卷上。  小马 过河为考生做了 雅思 OG写作Test2 Task2的解析。  雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus)  这是一道关于医疗与老龄的问题。这道题给出了一个社会现状,即医疗条件的改善使得人们越来越长寿。 题干给出这个现象,并问考生是否 the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantage。 考生应该通过各种论证方式,分别讨论这一现象的优缺点,最后给出自己的观点。  雅思OG写作写作思路(Think before writing)  面对优缺点类文章,一般在文章开头交代一下背景信息,然后分段讨论话题的优点和缺点,最后再结尾段 总结上文提到的观点,并明确提出自己的观点。在这篇文章中,开头段可以用自己的话交代一下医疗改善 让人越来越长寿的这个社会现象,为下文做铺垫。然后用一或两个主体段讨论人长寿的缺点(或优点),再用 另一个主体段做出让步,承认其在某种情况下也有优点(或缺点)。在每个主体段中都可以列分观点,并且用 符合逻辑的论证方式来支撑观点。最后的结尾段,明确的提出自己的观点,要对优缺点进行总结概括,而 不是一味的强调一方面的优点或缺点。  雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis)  Model Response  Over the past 50 years, people have become used to the idea that they will probably live longer than their grandparents did. However, a longer life is only desirable if you can look after  yourself and be independent, otherwise there can be disadvantages for everyone.  If you walk into a hospital in my country, you are likely to see a lot more elderly people than you did in the past. In fact, this is causing significant problems as there is a shortage of beds. Medical treatment is keeping the elderly alive, but at what cost to others?  On top of this, one of the biggest medical problems these days is dementia. Even if old people are still fit, they may not be able to look after themselves. They may have to live with their children or be cared for in a home, which can be expensive. Elderly people do not like to be a  burden, but their children can feel obliged to care for them.  Obviously, not all old people become ill. Those who remain healthy can enjoy a happy old age as long as they have saved enough money. People are more active in their sixties and seventies than they used to be and this can only be a good thing. They have time to enjoy their retirement and do a range of activities tha