雅思OG写作Test3Task1解析.docx

智课网IELTS备考资料 雅思OG写作Test3 Task1解析 摘要： 很多考生还不了解雅思OG写作写作思路以及雅思OG写作审题要领，今天小马小编带来雅思OG写作Test3 Task1，希望能带给大家更多的帮助。  小马 过河为考生做了 雅思 OG写作Test3 Task1的解析。  雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus) R I TI NG  这篇小作文是由三张地图组成的地图题,属于地理变迁类。题目描述了一个学校在一段时间(1950 年到 2010 年)的发展变化。直观上我们可以看到,从图一到图三,校园的区域安排发生了变化。在描写时,要 根据时间顺序和空间顺序来写,当然,还需要注意时态和语态。  雅思OG写作写作思路(Think before writing)  考生需要在 150 字之内对地图里的信息进行概括,有侧重的描写主要特征,必要时选择适当省略。本题的 写作内容主要围绕变与不变而展开,文章最好的组织方式是以时间为顺序,分别描写,这样比较不容易写 乱。我们可以看到 1950 年,学校初建的时候,靠近一片 houses,还有后面一块是 farmland。到了 1980 年,有两个区域发生了变化,原来的 farmland 变成了 sports field,而原 house 所在地被拆分并新建为 car park 和 science block 两个部分。再到 2010 年,很明显的我们看到 car park 的面积扩大并侵占了原 sport field 的位置,而 sport field 被挤到了原 playground 的一部分,这样 playground 的面积就缩小了。 考生可以根据这个地图把主体段分为三段,使文章显得逻辑清楚有层次。  雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis)  Model Response  The diagrams show West Park Secondary School at three different stages in its development: 1950, 1980 and 2010.  In 1950, the school was built close to a main road and next to a number of houses. A large area behind the school was turned into a playground, while the area behind the houses was farmland.  By 1980, the house had been demolished in order to make way for a small car park and an additional school building, which became the science block. In addition to the existing play ground, the school also gained the farmland and converted it into a sport field.  In 2010, the school building remained unchanged but the car park was extended to cover the entire sports field. As a result of this, the original playground was divided into two so that it provided a smaller playground and a small sports field. During this period, the school has increased in size and a car park has been created and enlarged. The combined recreational areas, however, first expanded and were then reduced in size.  (174 words)  雅思OG写作范文亮点(Sample highlights)  第 1 段:改写原题  第一段通常为题目的改写或提炼,原文里的 changes that