【雅思写作高分范文】告别低分泥沼.pdf

智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料 【雅思写作高分范文】告别低分泥沼 雅思考官simon应该大多数备考过一段时间的雅思考生都有所耳闻 。他的雅思大小作文范文是受坊间追捧的必备写作资料，但是即使是在 这偏偏都满分的高能辅助下，为何众人的雅思写作分数一直还是最不愿 意提起的伤痛？ 摘要： 雅思 考官simon应该大多数备考过一段时间的雅思考生都 有所耳闻。他的雅思大小作文范文是受坊间追捧的必备写作资料，但是 即使是在这偏偏都满分的高能辅助下，为何众人的 雅思写作 分数一直还是最不愿意提起的伤痛？ 很多的备考雅思的筒子都在学习Simon的范文，他的范文走的是完 全的平民路线，看其遣词造句，貌似平平，其实是大有丘壑，有我们这 些为了雅思写作7分都在苦苦求索的人所不具有的用最精简的用词，最 少的篇幅讲明白一个观点的大能力。他的范文也是很多真的懂雅思写作 的老师唯一推荐的材料。 但是，很多同学反应，背了很多范文，甚至还模仿了很多篇，仍然 没有效果 ，为什么? 原因是，考官不是non-native speaker, 他们不了解你们的最大问题 是 “逻辑” + “ 词组” 这一点从Simon对于这篇9分范文的分析就可以看出 ： Topic:In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? sample essay:In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend is having both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services. However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily