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【范文点评】 The Future Life ①With science and technology developing fast, it is certain that the future life will be more convenient and fast-paced.In the future we will have more free time and we may change jobs several times in our career.②More people will be able to work at home, doing less manual work but more learning and thinking, which will make our brains bigger and bodies smaller.③Besides, transportation will become cleaner, faster, cheaper and not so crowded.④There will be no need to worry about the environment being polluted while traveling, for new fuels and engines will be used. At that time，⑤people will be using the Internet to shop and do business while stores will be more like entertainment parks.⑥People will live in green houses and keep in touch with each other by using advanced videophones which can also be used for shopping and banking. ⑦Altogether, compared to the life we live today，the future life will be totally different.⑧However, no matter what happens in the future, as long as we learn to accept change and appreciate what is new and different，we will be well prepared for whatever the future may have in store and enjoy a happier and healthier life. 点评： ①由复合结构“with＋宾语＋宾语补足语”引出话题，自然流畅。 ②此句准确得体地运用了非谓语动词作状语和非限制性定语从句。 ③使用过渡词besides，把话题自然引到“交通方式的变化”上。 ④准确使用There is no need to do...句型，且多处使用非谓语动词，如：to worry，being polluted，traveling。 ⑤使用while来衔接两个不同的未来变化；前一个分句用将来进行时使举例时语言更生动形象。 ⑥by引导的方式状语中包含有一个定语从句。 ⑦用altogether引出对上面两段的猜想的总结。 ⑧由转折词however衔接两个句子，使句意互相照应，文章连贯流畅。 【类题尝试】 自1978年以来，我国海外留学生回国人数逐年上升。请在Shanghai Daily上发表一篇文章，根据图表叙述海外人员归国情况，分析回归原因，并希望更多的海外学者回国创业。 要求：1.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．词数150左右，短文开头已写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：制定政策—work out policies，海归人员—returnee There has been a reversal of the brain-drain since 1978 across the country.___________________________________________________________ One possible version： There has been a reversal of the brain-drain since 1978 across the country.Between 1978 and 2007, about 7,000 overseas Chinese returned to Shanghai after comp