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在雅思写作中如何做到“快准狠”;程玲/Jenny 26 Perth/Melbourne Monash University Bachelor of Communication “God helps those who help themselves” ;The harder you work, the luckier you get. 越努力，越幸运。 ;课程要点：;雅思写作评分标准;Range 范围;被动语态 the passive voice;被动语态 – 客观、学术、正式;被动语态 – 例：剑8，P167考官范文; But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems. I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. ;Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. ( 2012.01.12) Some people claim that free libraries should be established in each town. From my perspective, libraries cannot be replaced by the Internet. ;被动语态 – 地图题（2012.10.20）;The present floorplan;The proposed floorplan;It is obvious that the community center will be enlarged and more facilities will be constructed. Consequently, the area of the car park will be significantly reduced, and in fact, almost halved. Within the center, the number of meeting rooms will be reduced from three to two. There will be no change on the art room and the IT room. The main entrance to the reception will be moved to the east side of the center. What’s more, a café and a gym will be added to the south of the reception. A garden is going to be built in the southwest corner.;被动语态：流程图 剑8， p78;论文的标准结构;How to be swift, precise and sharp?;如何写背景句？;如何写背景句？;如何写中心句？;如何写中心句？;如何表达个人观点？;如何写主题句？;如何写主题句？;如何论证？ 3E2C;解释;解释;解释;例证;对比;对比;写作步骤：1.读题 analyze;;写作步骤：2. 构思 brainstorming;写作步骤：3.确定文章结构;The widespread use of the Internet, mobile phones and other portable electronic devices has completely changed the way people communicate with each other. Whether such changes are favorable or detrimental is a frequent topic of discussion. From my perspective, while some of the changes are positive, most of them are negative.;It is no doubt that the use of mobile phones an