刘家裕 5月2日.doc

个性化辅导教案 学生 刘家裕 科目 英语 年级 高三 日期 5月24日 教师 欧燕梅 教材 人教版 总课时 已上课时（含） 课题 作文（二） 教学内容：2013高考英语写作高分秘诀 （一）内容上：注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分（opening paragraph）——确定主题句说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展 结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。　　 　　 1．要使用高级词汇及短语 ① 使用高级词汇 ② 使用短语 ③ 使用谚语 ④ 使用表强调的词，如 just, single, only, not…at all; on earth; the very 正是....等 ⑤ 使用修辞手法:明喻， 暗喻，夸张，头韵，拟人等 as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock（像孔雀一样骄傲）; as blind as a bat（像蝙蝠一样瞎/盲目） . 2．句式要有变化 ①并列句复句 复句② 倒装句 ③ 强调句型 It is ……that (who)… ④ 非谓语动词。 ⑤ 虚拟语气 ⑥ 固定句型结构 too…to… so…that… such a…that… not only…but also… neither…nor… such as… not …until… so that… either…or… ⑦多种时态 3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成 表示罗列增加 First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand, Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular, 表示时间顺序 now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment, form now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreoverfurthermore, in fact, actually 表示转折关系 but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all, 表示并列关系 or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither　　…nor 表示因果关系 because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that 表示条件关系 as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless 表示让步关系 though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, whereve