英语中常见错误分析.ppt

英语写作中常见错误分析 Ⅰ. 不一致（disagreements) 所谓不一致，它不光包括主谓不一致，还包括数的不一致，时态不一致以及代词不一致等。例如： When one have money, he can do what he want to. (人一旦有了钱，他想干什么就干什么） 剖析：one 是单数第三人称，因而本句子的have应改为has, want改为wants,本句子是典型的主谓不一致。 When one has money, he can do what he wants (to do). II. 修饰语错位 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能够引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够重视。例如： I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末。 I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better. III. 句子不完整（sentence fragments) 在口语交际中，交际双方可以借助手势语气上下文，不用完整的句子就可以被理解。可是书面用语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意义表达不清。例如： There are many ways to know the society. For example by radio, newspaper, TV and so on. 剖析： 本句子后半部分不完整，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper. IV.悬垂结构（Dangling Modifiers) 所谓悬垂结构修饰语是指句首的短语与后面的句子的逻辑关系不清楚。例如： At the age of ten, my grandfather died. To do well in college, good grades are essential. 改为： When I was ten, my grandfather died. To do well in college, a student needs good grades. V. 词性误用 词性误用常表现为：介词当动词用，形容词当副词用，名词当动词用。例如： None can negative the importance of money. 剖析：negative是形容词，无用做动词 None can deny the importance of money. VI.指代不清（Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns) 指代不清主要是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。例如： 1.Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. 玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘 2.And we can also know the society by serving it yourself. 剖析： 读完上面的话，读者无法明确判断两位姑娘中谁将出嫁，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。 Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid. 句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。 We can also know society by serving it ourselves. VII.不间断句子（Run-on Sentences) 什么叫不间断句子，例如： There are many ways we get to know the outside world. 剖析： 这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There are many ways”以及 “we get to know the outside world”. 简单的把它们连在一起就不妥了。改为： There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the o