最新高考英语写作专题辅导课件-基础写作[经历感受].ppt

沙展介绍 1. 南沙区政府主办 2. 宏伟、壮观 3. 最大的沙雕高达7米，长达12米 活动经过 1. 早上9点出发，10点到达 2. 欣赏沙雕 3. 中午吃海鲜 4. 下午去湿地公园赏鸟 感受 1. 广州发展快 2. 担忧游客过多会破坏环境 假设你们班同学听说你和家人上周末去了广州南沙参观沙雕后都对此很感兴趣，邀请你在课堂上介绍这次参观活动。请你根据以下内容, 写一篇短文, 向你的同班同学讲述此次旅游经历及感受。 [写作内容] [写作要求] 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容； 2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总句数。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确, 信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。(注：因篇幅限制, 以下写作要求、评分标准、例题导写和能力提高等栏目可能被省略, 但教师课件中仍会保留) Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. [参考范文] Last weekend, I enjoyed a wonderful trip to Nansha with my family. We set out at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at 10 a.m. On arriving, we couldn’t wait to enjoy the exhibition of sand statues there, which was hosted by the local government of Nansha. The statues were very grand and fantastic, with the largest one as high as 7 meters and as long as 12 meters. Then, we had delicious seafood for lunch, after which we went to watch birds in the Nansha Wetland Park. It is an unforgettable trip and we are all happy because Guangzhou has been developing fast, but I am a little worried that too many tourists may destroy the ecological balance of Nansha. [精华点评] 文章是描述一次旅游活动, 如果考生简单按照表格内容顺序写作, 就显得不自然。因此考生可以根据时间顺序写作来调整表格内容。作文的主线是活动过程, 沙雕展览的介绍可以穿插其中, 最后是作者的感受。 由于写作的内容比较多, 考生在写作过程中要注意过渡和从句的使用。如第二句的On arriving...和第四句的..., after which...这两个句型提高了文章的连贯性。在语言运用方面, 考生可以运用有感情色彩的词汇和句子, 避免平铺直叙, 如文章中使用了we couldn’t wait to enjoy和it is an unforgettable trip等句子。 * * * * * 1. have a discussion讨论 2. pack sth into the suitcase把某物装进箱子 3. search the Internet上网查询 4. see sb off为某人送行 5. a five-day tour为期五天的旅行 6. drop out of school辍学 相关短语 7.live a...life过着……的生活 8.pay the tuition fees支付学费 9.once-in-a-life-time难得的 10.together with sb 同某人一起 11.win the first prize获得一等奖 12. be thought highly of 受到高度赞扬 13. come to a conclusion that... 得出结论如下 14. take great pains to do sth不遗余力地做某事 15. set a good example for us为我们树 立了一个好榜样 16. be impressed by... 对……印象深刻; 为……所感动 17. devote one’s spare time to helping others 利用业余时间帮助他人 1. Last Monday, we were ha