雅思大作文范文点评——雇员年轻化.docxVIP

智课网IELTS备考资料雅思大作文范文点评——雇员年轻化 摘要： 此段运用了很多套句。很多学生会问套句会不会被考官评为低分？！请注意，如果我不说明，你是否能够看出第1段的几句话是套句？！也就是说，很多时候有些表达的方法比较有限，难 Recent years have witnessed the tendency that companies, in order to give opportunities to new generation, tend to encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. After pondering this phenomenon on many occasions, I finally reach the opinion that this trend is something worthy to be advocated and I cannot skip it. Inevitably, there are numerous reasons that count. I would like to expose a few of the most conspicuous ones as follows. 点评：第1段写的很流畅，介绍了背景，没有重复